Some people mentioned that my stories are not perfect.
Recently, a user posted his review of my stories, emphasizing that said writing has many typos, spellchecks, and grammatical errors. That user also complained that my renders were not exactly as described in the stories.
That user also suggested I get better editors and take more care at making sure my writing is as perfect as it can be and my renders are better made so that they closely illustrate what’s happening in the story, otherwise, I will lose users.
Since that “review” is within the comment section of a recent post, and probably not all would read it as many might have already read said post and won’t go back just to read the comments, I decided to re-post my answer here:
1- I am a native FRENCH speaker. English is my second language. Except for part of my work (documentation), internet, and writing those stories, I do not use English. Errors are unavoidable.
2- I used the default OpenOffice/LibreOffice/Google Docs spell and grammar checker. I recently began to use Grammarly, but apparently, none of those is perfect.
3- The site is free for all users. I PAY FOR IT. It means that I get no money from it. But everybody gets everything out of it, no money required.
4- No money means I will not spend to have any sort of professional editor or even pay for the “premium” version of Grammarly.
5- Daz3D is a posing/dress-me-up software. I don’t give a shit if the images are not “real looking”. It’s not their purpose. I use them for my own inspiration and, why not, share them so that they give a little image of what I’m seeing in my mind in these setups. Because I write down the “movies” that are playing in my head.
5- Daz3D is free. However, the props, clothing, and accessories are, again $$$, which I PAY of my own pocket. You get what I can get. Live with it.
5a- I am NOT a visual artist nor a graphic designer. I totally suck at drawing. Heck, I can’t even design a good-looking false magazine cover. I can’t freely draw a dog. A house and a basic car, yes, but don’t ask me to draw a face!
6- This storywriting thing is a hobby. I’m not published (for money) on Amazon or anywhere else. I don’t expect a Pulitzer prize or any kind of award.
7- This site is my way of sharing with the rest of the world, what my silly imagination can come up with. Why? Because I simply can’t stop thinking about all those ideas, and if I don’t share them, I will stop writing them… and I feel it will be a waste of creativity.
I would LOVE to think that this is the best FREE fetish story website. But it’s not.
I would LOVE to think that I’m the best FREE fetish story writer. But I am not.
Heck, my “dream” is for this site, for my stories, or at least one of them, to be recognized by someone “influential” in the fetish industry. Alas, in 25 years, it never happened and, even tho I still wish for it, my hopes are pretty much dead.
This site is not the best. My storytelling is not the best. My writing is not the best. My English is not the best. My 3D art creations are not the best.
However, they are the best I can offer.
So, since all of this is, again, FREE, nobody has any “right” to ask me for perfection. If someone doesn’t like it, someone just has to go elsewhere.
And finally, EVERY TIME someone pointed out to me a vibrant error, a mix-up in names, or a nuclear-fallout consequence grammar mistake, I corrected it.
Would you prefer five un-skippable ads at the start of the story, followed by a chapter-long in-story ad in the middle, a few more un-skippable ads a few chapters later, and a pledge for the Patreon page at the end?
“Please share, subscribe, ring the bell, paint it on your car, and don’t forget to follow me on my Patreon page (and get a monthly subscription) if you want more free quality content with ads and other shit in it”.
Karen put on her brand new neck-entry catsuit she just received, compliments of ShinyStuff. She got it for free but if you use the promo code “moreshittystuff”, you can get a whopping 10% discount if you buy $2000 or more on your next order. This offer ends in 10 days, so hurry up and don’t forget to say that Karen sent you and you will get a free complimentary set of butthole cream, so it will hurt less the next time we screw you over.
But Karen didn’t need this cream. As an influencer, she was able to get a lot of stuff for free and be the envy of Lynda, Sandra, Pete, Kate, and the rest of the gang.
Once she smoothed out her ShinyStuff Latex Catsuit, she added the ShinyStuff extra-Shine – with added Aloe Vera and kelp extract, using their patented lint-free eco-friendly cloth made of recycled cat hairballs. She loved to see her reflection in the mirror she got from Wally World, which she put on the wall of her room, filled with wonderful furniture from Ikea…
I better stop there.
This is a free world, and this is a free site.
You are free to choose.
One last thing (yeah, I had to plug Steve Jobs/Apple – although I’m an anti-Apple guy): 400+ stories. One author. (as a side note, for those old geezers like me, that saying it’s also Columbo-like)
Pierre aka Pete
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